How to Write for Blink and TritonLink
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January 26, 2010 2:41:28 PM PST
Follow these guidelines to write active, concise, and scannable Web pages for Blink and TritonLink.
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- Search existing content: Make sure what you're planning to write doesn't repeat existing content. (Link to it instead.)
- Determine placement: Make sure your new page or set of pages has a logical home in the existing site structure.
- Consider navigation: How will users navigate to your new content, and what other existing content should link to your new page(s)?
- Visualize someone in your target audience. For background information on identifying your audience, see step 1 of How to Organize Content.
- Write to that person, using second person ("you" and "your"). Examples:
- Find out how to apply to graduate school.
- Sign and date each page of your application.
- Provide your supervisor with a written letter of resignation, including the effective date of your resignation.
- If you're the Human Resources contact for your department, follow these steps.
Make sure that all content on the page supports the main message.
- Answer this in 1 sentence: "What is the one thing I want to get across on this page?"
- Put your main message at the top of your Web page.
- Make the main message as actionable as possible. Example:
- Avoid this: "All students must have health insurance to enroll."
- Use this instead: "Find out how to get student health insurance, a requirement for enrollment."
- If you have 2 main messages, create 2 pages. Each page can handle only 1 main message or topic.
- Examples of main messages:
- Avoid liability for your department by learning who is authorized to sign contracts and agreements.
- You can prevent most pest infestations with these simple tips:
- Restrict sentences to 25 words or fewer.
- Delete unnecessary words and phrases such as "in order to."
- Simplify complicated words and phrases: "approval to spend" instead of "authorization for the expenditure of funds."
- Use active voice. Passive voice obscures clarity, uses more words, and slows the reader down.
- Choose verbs that show action: rank, report, discuss, identify, contact.
- Have the subject do the action: "The committee creates policies," not "Policies are created by the committee."
- If you find a form of the verb "to be" (am, is, are, was, were, been, being), try to rewrite the sentence using an active verb.
- Exceptions: Passive voice is appropriate when:
- The "doer" is unknown, e.g., "The announcement was posted Tuesday."
- The "doer" is not important, e.g., "The supplies are on their way."
- Tact is required, e.g., "The signature was omitted."
- Choose nouns you can "see." Examples:
- Take a class.
- Sign up for a workshop.
- But not: Become part of a unique instructional environment.
Write the way you would speak to a person in your target audience:
- Use contractions: can't, you'll, isn't, they're.
- Use pronouns: you, he, they, it.
- To make sure it's conversational, read your page aloud and listen for words or phrases you wouldn't use while talking.
Restrict paragraph length to:
- 50 words
- 4 to 5 lines
- 3 sentences
Use:
- Short, active summaries
- Bullet lists
- Bold or subheads to "chunk" information
- Links to detail pages
- Use information-carrying words in titles, words that readers might search on to find your pages. Examples:
- Gifts and Awards: Flowers
- Final Exam Responsibilities
- Separate chunks of information with subheads to help readers quickly see what's on the page.
- Make subheads informative instead of cute or catchy.
- Avoid this: "Yikes! It's a snake!"
- Use this instead: "Avoid contact with snakes."
- Avoid using questions. They don't give information, and they require you to repeat words, making the text longer. Example:
- Avoid this:
How often can I donate? Donors can give blood every 56 days.
- Use this instead:
Donors can give blood every 56 days.
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